Earth Science January
9, 2014
Current event Lilly
Grass
This
article clearly explains the history of the climate in America, and gives the
audience a clear reason for the frigid weather we all have been experiencing in
the past week. I believe it is very important for us to all be aware of why the
temperatures have been dropping so rapidly.
I thought this article was a great choice because not only is it very
interesting, but we can all relate to it because we have all experienced this
crisp weather.
Overall,
this was a very informative and well written article. I liked how the authors
got right to the point, and gave a lot historical facts about our climate. I
also liked how they gave us exact temperatures in specific places at an exact
time; it was very interesting to read about. Lastly, they did a nice job of
getting information from lots of different locates, rather than just using
temperatures from one location. One thing I would change is, include more
information about the vortex, and go into more depth about why there was a
change in the polar vertex.
Barron,
James, and Henry Fountain. "Polar Vortex: Temperatures Fall Far,
Fast." Polar Vortex: Temperatures Fall Far, Fast. New York Times, 6
Jan. 2014. Web. 7 Jan. 2014.
I like in your review that you incorporated quotes in the perfect moments.
ReplyDeleteSpecifically, you brought in people's viewpoints on how the polar vertex's winds swiftly changed. Also, I think that you put together a pretty solid summary. You did not just say that the polar vertex's winds caused cold temperatures, but you also backed it up with evidence from your article. This is really important in making the reader become attracted to your review. There is a lot of information in your article, but you still kept your review relatively short and sweet. Another part of your review that I like is that you picked only the quotes that would fit best in what point you were trying to get across. Before I read this, I was unfamiliar with polar vertex's. I find it interesting that the arctic air was released into the plains which overpowered the warm air (pushed it out). Also, I felt that the most interesting and neat thing about this review and article is that scientists believed the change in winds occurred later in winter than usual, causing the temperatures to reach negative numbers. Overall, I really like your review, and how you made it appealing to your audience. If I had to suggest one thing on how your review could be better, it would be include a tad more summary about New York (because it is where we live) and the temperatures occurring here. Good job!