tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4191753351225443854.post1624897211041481132..comments2015-11-19T05:11:31.981-08:00Comments on Core Earth Science Honors I: Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08576127734266494869noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4191753351225443854.post-45022537994006762432015-11-13T05:13:54.331-08:002015-11-13T05:13:54.331-08:00I really enjoyed Alston Tarry's review on the ...I really enjoyed Alston Tarry's review on the article "Asteroid Impact, Volcanism Were One-Two Push for Dinosaurs." Alston did a really good job reviewing this article. First of, he did an excellent job summarizing the article. He filled you in on everything you needed to know about the topic as well as going into detail about things such as impact of asteroids on dinosaurs. Also, I really enjoyed Alston's opinion about the article’s importance. Lastly, Alston decided to talk about the video we watched in class. This gave legitimacy to the argument he was trying because he was using an outside source. Although Alston did a very good job, there were a couple things that he could’ve done that would have made it even better. For example, Alston could’ve included some quotes from scientists working on this topic because it would have added some credibility to the argument. After reading this review, the most interesting fact that I came across was how the asteroid and volcanoes covered the earth with dust and toxic fumes, cutting off sunlight and killing all life.Gabbie Ambosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07619201818286143023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4191753351225443854.post-72360231900166468522015-11-13T05:13:16.956-08:002015-11-13T05:13:16.956-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Gabbie Ambosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07619201818286143023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4191753351225443854.post-34409049390271985242015-11-11T12:41:29.166-08:002015-11-11T12:41:29.166-08:00Alston Tarry reviewed the article “Asteroid Impact...Alston Tarry reviewed the article “Asteroid Impact, Volcanism Were One-Tow Push for Dinosaurs”. Alston did a great job of summarizing the article and got right to the point. He also explained thoroughly how the impact of the asteroid and the volcanos ended the dinosaurs life and all other life on earth. Another thing Alston did well at was he used his own knowledge from class to help the reader of the review to get a better understanding. After reading this article review, I thought it was interesting how the group of students from Berkeley discussed the two theories of how life ended on earth: volcanism and asteroid impact. I thought it was also interesting how he connected the two theories to cause the effect of wiping out life on earth. One thing I think Alston could have improved on was using specific evidence, for example using quotes, in his review. He mentioned how the author of the article used great details to support the theories, but Alston himself did not mention any of them.Mimi Buendiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09461114391840394696noreply@blogger.com